Posted by manualblock [ 69.112.69.86 ] on September 18, 2005 at 18:35:53:

In Reply to: So starting the third week after Katrina... posted by wunhuanglo on September 18, 2005 at 15:43:07:

Man you just wrote a good Hiaku!

Butterflies darting;
In and Out of all the stuff,
Piled around the house.

Believe me; that is the real thing. You can't fake this.
5/7/5
looking intently at the object irrespective of any other thought
the season expressed( butterflies come out in August)
nature in a mental photo

You're a regular Basho.
Can I submit that in your name to the international Haiku contest?

Replies:

• Re: All the credit goes to you, John - wunhuanglo 04:46:22 09/20/05 (1)
  • Re: All the credit goes to you, John - manualblock 07:11:21 09/20/05 (0)