Posted by akhilesh [ 129.244.120.200 ] on November 11, 2005 at 10:44:36:

In Reply to: Re: New Geddes book on "Audio, Acoustics and Perception" - first chapter online posted by Earl Geddes on November 10, 2005 at 11:20:47:

HI Earl,
I agree with what you are saying, of course.
Couple of suggestions:
1. THe material in the first chapter seems too wordy. YOu may want to write more concisely, and make the same points. There seems to be some repetition.
2. Diagrams would help a lot. FOr example, waveforms showing cannons, orchestra, etc would be very helpful, and perhaps break the tedium of reading non-stop text.

OVerall, a worthy effort so far!
Stop me if you don;t like this kind of feedback, though I mean it constructively.
-akhilesh

Replies:

• Re: Suggestion - Earl Geddes 11:07:29 11/11/05 (2)
  • Re: Suggestion - akhilesh 11:50:53 11/11/05 (0)
  • Re: Suggestion - Wayne Parham 11:20:57 11/11/05 (0)